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Don't judge what I've become by ~ego-sponge:iconego-sponge:



Please reach out and touch my sky
There is no time for questions.
The electric sky is falling apart, falling into pools.
Explosive intentions splitting the grand
     ...Nothing

My foolish transcendence out of grace
Naked and sprawled out in the hard-feathered nether.
The flocks of my stone-faced forefathers;
Chewing and spitting into my future.
Chastising and tearing at my bloody
     Furnace.

My anger
My wrath
My fear.
     
     Short-leashed attention whipping at my aegis.
     Blistering kettle of
     Selfish desires.

To fall apart in this place
Would be my final undoing.

Not a stitch of such grace could be found
In my shadow.

The loss of one's attempt to flee
This place would be the death of me.
©2008-2009 ~ego-sponge
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Author's Comments

Don't really know why I wrote this; I wrote one poem, and then this just poured out afterwards.

Love it.

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:iconmelanomaly:
amazing..

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:iconsicsided:
liked it, but somewhat straight forward. The pictured you painted in my mind was that a machine that although the same as the others, could still achieve more.

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:iconsighingshoelaces:
a great expression of what your feeling i always like your poems
:iconsighingshoelaces:
you know.... i read it again.

and this is the best one yet.

because its the most honest.

and the most beautiful.

Made me cry a little.

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February 17, 2008
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